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How Many Rounds of Self-Editing Do I Need?

As an editor, one question I hear over and over from clients is how to know when you’ve done enough self-editing and don’t need any more revisions. Writers tend to be perfectionists, so it can be challenging to know when they are finished self-editing and can move onto the next stage.

As a general rule, a piece requires at least three to five read throughs. These will include editing for content as well as editing for the writing itself.

Dealing with the content and other big picture elements, like structure, before jumping into editing the writing can help save you a lot of time. Consider you’ve written a scene, and you spend hours and hours editing the writing. It takes you days to get the scene exactly the way you want it. Then later, as you read through and continue with your editing, you realize that that scene doesn’t actually belong in your book at all!

It’s important to note that even though there will certainly be scenes or sections that you will end up cutting from your book, NONE of that writing time (or editing time!) is ever a waste. You learn from every section you write, and from every section you cut. Just like writing is a practice by which you improve, so is editing. With each scene you cut, you recognize and learn to avoid writing that DOESN’T work, a skill which is just as important as recognizing strong writing.

Some writers try to edit both the writing and the content concurrently, but I advise against this. Doing so will likely lead to overwhelm and cause you to overlook mistakes that you would have otherwise caught. It is more effective for you to zero-in on specific elements with each read through.

This takes us back to our question: how do you know when it's actually done? At what point do you say, “That's it, this piece is finished. I cannot make it any better than it is”? Especially when, with each read through, you’re still making changes here and there?

If the changes that you’re making are still related to content and structure, then you aren’t finished yet. If you are still making changes to the plot or cutting and pasting sections, or deleting sections altogether, then you are not finished yet.

Keep editing until the content and the structure of your book are solid. You’ll know you’re done if the writing is strong, and you are only making tiny tweaks. A minor change in word order. A change in word choice. Removing italics from a line. Adding an elusive comma. When all that's left is those tiny tweaks, then you know you're done.

With shorter works, like short stories and articles and pieces that are under about ten thousand words, probably three to five read-throughs will be more than enough. During those three to five rounds, you will be able to make all of the structural changes, content changes, and writing related, grammar, line editing changes that you need to make.

But when you're talking about something that is longer, like an e-book of around thirty thousand words or a full length fifty, sixty, seventy, eighty thousand word book, then It's probably going to take you more than three to five rounds. The truth of the matter is that most books that make it to the shelf have gone through so many rounds of edits, closer to ten, some even closer to twenty.

And yes, depending on which part of the process you prefer, this might overwhelm you. But if you remind yourself that this is what’s best for your book, that these rounds of edits make it a stronger story, and that this is how you will be able to put out your very best work, that understanding will help keep you motivated and stick to it until it’s finished.

About that feedback...
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The truth is that some feedback you’ll receive will be very useful--it will truly help you improve as a writer--and some will be utterly useless. And the truth is that *most* of the useless feedback is positive. For example, “This was a great book!” or “I love this author!” Those are wonderful sentiments, and every author LOVES to hear them! But while they are great for our egos, they do nothing for our writing.
Negative feedback, on the other hand, while it may feel like a punch in the face, is really the best thing for a writer. Here are some examples:
* The main character didn’t seem believable.
* The writer spent too much time describing settings/details.
* The secondary plot was underdeveloped.
* The order of events left me confused.
* The dialogue was realistic, but boring.

A writer can sit with each of these statements and analyze how she can make specific changes to improve her writing.

So don’t get discouraged if at any stage of your writing process you receive negative feedback. Know that, while it may hurt now, it really is in your (and your book’s!) best interest.
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Finishing Your Manuscript

Have you got a great book idea, but don’t know how to start? Have you started writing several manuscripts, but haven’t completed any? 

If you answered yes to either of these questions, then step into the light, my friend…

Let me share with you a few strategies that most published authors follow: 

  1. Focus on ONE project. Decide which of the several manuscripts sitting in your drawer (or on your computer) you feel most passionate about, and forget about the rest for now. If ideas come up for the others as you work on this one, jot those ideas down, but do not spend your writing time fleshing them out. Dedicate any writing time you have to the one project you chose. 

  2. Do some amount of planning before you jump in. For some, this will be a full outline. For others, it will simply be a set (or sets) of ideas regarding what the story is about and it’s general trajectory. If you’re writing fiction, determine your main plot points and spend time developing your characters. If you’re writing fantasy, spend some time world building. For non-fiction, sketch out the main points you will discuss, and any related subpoints. Putting in the time now, before you begin the project, will help you keep the details of your manuscript straight so you don’t get confused or distracted later on. 

  3. Write down your intention for this specific project. Why are you writing it? Who will benefit from it? Keep this, your “why,” printed in front of you, so you can easily refer to it as you write. This will help you stay focussed when, as so often happens in writing, you find yourself veering off the path. 

  4. Know that to be a writer, you must write EVEN when you are not inspired. Louis L’Amour is quoted to have said, “Start writing no matter what. The water does not flow until the faucet is turned on.” This is one of my favorite writing quotes, because it captures the writer’s journey so perfectly. Who doesn’t want to feel inspired? We all do! But what distinguishes someone who will finish from someone will just continue to dream—what distinguishes a professional from an amateur—is that the first will remain committed to writing regularly, while the second will wait for inspiration... which may never strike. Commit to writing daily. This may be a minimum number of words, or a certain amount of “butt in chair” time. In either case, decide which, and stick with it! 

  5. Don’t censor or edit as your write. If you do so, you run the risk of never finishing. Remember that this is just your first draft; it doesn’t have to be perfect right at the start. Actually, it doesn’t even have to be good; it just has to be written! You can work with a first draft. You can revise and rewrite it later on. You can’t, however, do anything with a blank page. So for now, focus on just getting this story written, getting it out of your mind and onto the page, even if you know it still needs work. 

Finishing your first draft is completely possible with some time and commitment. If it has always been your dream to write a book, follow the strategies above, and you WILL get there! 

If you’d like further guidance on your project, or you still feel overwhelmed by the process, contact me for a complimentary writing-coaching session so we can get you back on track.

Unblocking Writers Block (Part 1)

There is lots of controversy surrounding the legitimacy of writer’s block, but I’m not going to argue for or against it here. Whether or not writer’s block is a real phenomenon is inconsequential; the truth is, all writers eventually find themselves at a point where they feel unable to proceed, where they are unsure of the direction to take their piece, or they run out of ideas completely, or they simply feel deflated by a lack of external validation, and these feelings reflect as creative obstacles. In this article I will share some techniques to help you overcome whatever is preventing you from getting those words down.

While our emotional state doesn’t appear to be directly related to our creative ability, the truth is that if our emotional state is disturbed, our entire being is affected. We are affected physically and mentally, and consequently, creatively. Such emotional chaos can overwhelm us to the point of paralysis; we are not able to reason or work or think about anything clearly.  

Even if the underlying cause of your emotional distress cannot be easily removed or fixed, there are still ways for you to clear this internal chaos, so that you can again begin to create:

  1. Write in your journal. Release your pent up anger or fear or anxiety or sadness onto pages that you know are safe from prying eyes. Let the words—or drawings or doodles—go where they need to. Sometimes the physical act of getting words on paper releases you, even if you begin by not knowing what to say or quite what’s bothering you.

  2. Write a letter. This works similarly to the concept of journaling, but I find that letter writing offers greater relief. Address the letter to the person who hurt you, to the one you’re missing, to the loved one who has passed. To someone you’re mourning, even if that is you. It could be a letter to God. Or to a concept: to your success, your dreams, your failures, your goals, your fears. Writing a letter helps put the emotions out of you. It helps to organize them so that you can review and analyze them, and thus think (and create!) more clearly. Even if the letter is to an actual person, you don’t have to send it; often penning it is enough to release the turmoil inside of you.

Regardless of whether or not the barrier to your writing flow is emotional, the following techniques can help you overcome that barrier:

  1. Go for a walk, especially outdoors. Physical activity gets blood pumping to all areas of your body, including, of course, your brain, helping to stimulate thoughts and creativity. The fresh outdoor air—the sights, sounds and smells of nature—provide you with a sense of serenity while simultaneously connecting you with a larger purpose, provoking inspiration and direction.

  2. Read. Reading in your genre can help inspire you. Immersing yourself in someone else’s creativity can often spur your own. Reading in your craft can help increase your knowledge and elevate your style, which will in turn widen your mindspace to allow you to create.

  3. Remind yourself of your purpose. One of the main methods of remaining committed to your writing is remembering the intention you had when you began the piece, acknowledging how it will affect your readers, and realizing how much they will gain from it. Take time to reconnect with this intention.

  4. Check your mindset. At this point, your mindset may be your biggest enemy. If you find yourself doubting yourself, or doubting your piece, then of course you will eventually get stuck. Like begets like, so if you keep cultivating negative thoughts, you will keep reaping negative results. “I can’t do this,” or “who am I to do this,” or “this task is too big,” or “I can’t write a book,” or “who am I to have a goal of bestseller status” are all thoughts that set you up for failure. I can not stress enough the importance of a positive mindset! The great thing about it is that it can be learned. When we repeat positive statements about ourselves and our work, we eventually begin to believe them. Not only that, but we take steps to actualize them. So even if you don’t believe those affirmation yet, keep repeating them to yourself. Keep saying them over and over, day after day, until eventually you find that they are indeed your own beliefs. This positive mindset will help you stay committed to your writing goal, remain focused on the result, and thus, help you to achieve it.

In Part 2 of this series, I’ll be discussing techniques that can help you maneuver crossroads and dead ends in your work. Make sure to tune in next week!

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